Tonight, another bullet stung the silence. ‘Up! Children, up!’ voice when it came, tense and low, was Father’s, ‘Up! Wear something, we must leave for Grandma’s now!’
Then mother, it
seemed, would not go. ‘Tonight? No how we won’t end up seen or even shot!’
It was Alhaji
Keulere’s gate. It jangled loudly just again. Three blows, then four. Then
five, the sixth so brute and brash. Father sprang again to another curtain and
peered.
‘What?! If we do not
run now, we are next’. A seventh blow. ‘Iwo woman yi! They would enter this
compound and shoot us, all of us!’ Father continued to shout. Mother was too
bold. Mother would not bulge. Was Mother not hearing the noise? Why would
she not bulge? Was Mother ready to die?
She was not.
Morning is here. I
hear our night-guards had a drunken festival at midnight. And Alhaji Keulere’s
goats too!
Iwo woman yi — You this woman.
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...most delighted to read such brilliance from a creative mind whom i appreciate so much. Well placed Oyin!
ReplyDeleteThanks Femi. Thanks for the kind words.
DeleteLol...sharp! Compressing intense scenes like those and still conducting the correct mood, Sharp!
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Hehe...thank you for reading, Mikina.
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This is good!!! did well with the finish,as well as our imaginations...keep it up bro!!!...
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