Journeying through Abeokuta one morning a fleet of motorists sped out of the jam and soaked the air in reckless dust. An hour later, I came across a suicide scene and a silent woman wavering on the bridge
A dawn of dim feathers, the road spat
Loud, a new mist of robot chaos
Where limbs were groves of lust, rouse
Beneath throngs of screech and curse
A faint dark in the wind, not voice-frothsWhom the morning had made all one with the soft
Receding shadow, stale shafts of night
The highway split is rounded by dwarfs, double-tiered
And strange procession on the flick of time
Offers a brown-rimed brew – of a lone sheath freed
From presences nocturnal, brown-eyed, brows brown
Shaped by the saddened hour. The light awaited harvest
Of the winding breeds when air was brown,
Brown as furrowed bricklayer beard shrivelled off
The brown wings of the sun
Brown season it was — nostril
Draws breath in dew-wet ash, eternal to the soul
Eternal to me comes the brush of feet
In sweet sprint of gore-shone death,
But it arose —
A strange image, when yet I saw
Sudden form at the haze
Of death’s brown consul, slouched
Despair of moth-plagued fur at embrace
Of the lingering guardian trough, silent as the world
And in that moment broke her tear of libation,
The brown suds of her heart. A racing cloud
Sunk her chin, for death she had known,
First reaper of the dust to time’s scorn,
Pale-eyed of the blurry dome… yet such
Startled pause at the hem she knew
Now the trench teems with grief,
Joyful rite from the vicious deep
Brown was I, then, witness though
I spied the world through her eyes,
A human will indifferent to the hour’s passion
Shrunk in my ears, rose rueful
The imprecations of all humanity…
Woman, you must stretch out
Like the sky. And shred your soul
Against the brown belly of the morning river
Sepia was first published on Kaanem Art Magazine
Very very beautiful, Oyin
ReplyDeleteThanks, Alice
DeleteAfter reading this, I was just staring at a wall, thinking many things. It's great how you poets soak up such complex inspiration from ordinary happenings. Nice work and yeah, lovely blog
ReplyDeleteSmiles. Thanks for your comment, B
DeleteBrilliant!
ReplyDeleteYour reading's appreciated
DeleteNow that was made up with a quality of words
ReplyDeleteProud of you, dearie. Really proud.
ReplyDeleteKemi
Hmmmm! Do you know what? At times I wonder your metaphors are captivating and apt. Brown belly of the morning river. My prof.
ReplyDeleteWow! you are deep bro
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ReplyDeleteGreat poem (y)
ReplyDeleteMemorable last lines. Thumbs up
ReplyDeleteStunning. Wow over and over again. Very deep. Brilliant. I'm sorry I don't have any criticism for you because I have not quite grasped all of what is here yet. You're getting better.
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Delete*Wide smiles* thanks, Seun. I don't mind if response drifts from the critical, you know. Besides, I've been trying to explore new themes in contemporary poetry. The brief minuscle ordinariness that bothers the hearts of many. Thanks for stopping by tho :)
DeleteThis is my thought about this work,we are under the shovel crying for
ReplyDeletewho to raise the dust but we have no choice than to look beyond the
clouds.
every man has problems but stretching beyond the sky with eye open to the sea of possibilities.
thats my thought.
we must not cast our fate under the sun thinking all is well but watch our for the water of misfortune and drain them out before we are flooded.
ReplyDeletethat all i think about this poem.
Thanks for the insight, Yomi. Although there is a variegated essence to the work, you successfully state what the story — in the poem told — indirectly wishes to preach. There is indeed an urgent need — even more urgently individual — to find or reclaim the dignity of freedom in life before life itself surrenders us to scratch out freedom in death. Thanks again for the thoughts.
DeleteBRAVO!
ReplyDeleteAnd you made suicide see so sweet to learn about. The concluding lines are golden
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting, Mr Samson
DeleteMany pauses for thought here and there - the beginning is descriptive with inputs of gut wrenching detachment as in “groves of lust” ─ “stale shafts of night” and “gore shone death” - witnessing a suicide scene is never a pleasant experience. The end is almost like a purge after acknowledging the time-scorned imprecations of humanity. One wonders at the past tense of “were groves of lust” yet there impact of what they “rouse” is in the present.
ReplyDeleteBarely two months and you're already blogging like a veteran, Thumbs up bro As for Literary content, it's no longer news, you rock pass Aso
ReplyDeleteRemarkable and scintillating. Thumbs up, Mr Oyin Oludipe
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful sir! Sweet imagery. There's so much to learn.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Sir Olawale!
DeleteThis almost brought me to tears, Oludipe. Absolutely brilliant. And the repetition of brown just... works. I have nothing to suggest. It's my favourite of yours that I have read so far. Shame it came from such a morbid experience, but you've penned it so emotionally. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteSuch a great poem. I really enjoyed reading this.
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