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Thursday 3 July 2014

You Must Stretch Out Like The Sky


Journeying through Abeokuta one morning a fleet of motorists sped out of the jam and soaked the air in reckless dust. An hour later, I came across a suicide scene and a silent woman wavering on the bridge



          A dawn of dim feathers, the road spat

Loud, a new mist of robot chaos
 
Where limbs were groves of lust, rouse
 
Beneath throngs of screech and curse
 
A faint dark in the wind, not voice-froths

Whom the morning had made all one with the soft
 

Receding shadow, stale shafts of night


          The highway split is rounded by dwarfs, double-tiered

And strange procession on the flick of time
 

Offers a brown-rimed brew – of a lone sheath freed
 

From presences nocturnal, brown-eyed, brows brown
 

Shaped by the saddened hour. The light awaited harvest
 

Of the winding breeds when air was brown,
 

Brown as furrowed bricklayer beard shrivelled off

The brown wings of the sun


          Brown season it was — nostril
 

Draws breath in dew-wet ash, eternal to the soul
 

Eternal to me comes the brush of feet
 

In sweet sprint of gore-shone death,


          But it arose

A strange image, when yet I saw 

Sudden form at the haze
 

Of death’s brown consul, slouched
 

Despair of moth-plagued fur at embrace
 

Of the lingering guardian trough, silent as the world


          And in that moment broke her tear of libation,
 

The brown suds of her heart. A racing cloud
 

Sunk her chin, for death she had known,
 

First reaper of the dust to time’s scorn,
 

Pale-eyed of the blurry dome… yet such
 

Startled pause at the hem she knew


          Now the trench teems with grief,
 
Joyful rite from the vicious deep
 

Brown was I, then, witness though
 

I spied the world through her eyes,
 

A human will indifferent to the hour’s passion
 

Shrunk in my ears, rose rueful
 

The imprecations of all humanity…


          Woman, you must stretch out
 

Like the sky. And shred your soul
 

Against the brown belly of the morning river



Sepia was first published on Kaanem Art Magazine
 

30 comments:

  1. Very very beautiful, Oyin

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  2. After reading this, I was just staring at a wall, thinking many things. It's great how you poets soak up such complex inspiration from ordinary happenings. Nice work and yeah, lovely blog

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  3. Now that was made up with a quality of words

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  4. Proud of you, dearie. Really proud.

    Kemi

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  5. Hmmmm! Do you know what? At times I wonder your metaphors are captivating and apt. Brown belly of the morning river. My prof.

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  6. My brother you bake words wey i dey like chop

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  7. Great poem (y)

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  8. Memorable last lines. Thumbs up

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  9. Stunning. Wow over and over again. Very deep. Brilliant. I'm sorry I don't have any criticism for you because I have not quite grasped all of what is here yet. You're getting better.

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    2. *Wide smiles* thanks, Seun. I don't mind if response drifts from the critical, you know. Besides, I've been trying to explore new themes in contemporary poetry. The brief minuscle ordinariness that bothers the hearts of many. Thanks for stopping by tho :)

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  10. ogunniyi abayomi7 July 2014 at 05:07

    This is my thought about this work,we are under the shovel crying for
    who to raise the dust but we have no choice than to look beyond the
    clouds.
    every man has problems but stretching beyond the sky with eye open to the sea of possibilities.
    thats my thought.

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  11. ogunniyi abayomi7 July 2014 at 06:27

    we must not cast our fate under the sun thinking all is well but watch our for the water of misfortune and drain them out before we are flooded.
    that all i think about this poem.

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    1. Thanks for the insight, Yomi. Although there is a variegated essence to the work, you successfully state what the story — in the poem told — indirectly wishes to preach. There is indeed an urgent need — even more urgently individual — to find or reclaim the dignity of freedom in life before life itself surrenders us to scratch out freedom in death. Thanks again for the thoughts.

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  12. Diana Antonio Sievert7 July 2014 at 10:50

    BRAVO!

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  13. And you made suicide see so sweet to learn about. The concluding lines are golden

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  14. Many pauses for thought here and there - the beginning is descriptive with inputs of gut wrenching detachment as in “groves of lust” ─ “stale shafts of night” and “gore shone death” - witnessing a suicide scene is never a pleasant experience. The end is almost like a purge after acknowledging the time-scorned imprecations of humanity. One wonders at the past tense of “were groves of lust” yet there impact of what they “rouse” is in the present.

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  15. Barely two months and you're already blogging like a veteran, Thumbs up bro As for Literary content, it's no longer news, you rock pass Aso

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  16. Remarkable and scintillating. Thumbs up, Mr Oyin Oludipe

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  17. This is beautiful sir! Sweet imagery. There's so much to learn.

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  18. Nathan Hassall13 July 2014 at 17:05

    This almost brought me to tears, Oludipe. Absolutely brilliant. And the repetition of brown just... works. I have nothing to suggest. It's my favourite of yours that I have read so far. Shame it came from such a morbid experience, but you've penned it so emotionally. Excellent.

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  19. Martelle McPartland27 July 2014 at 12:37

    Such a great poem. I really enjoyed reading this.

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